Once
students know how they will organize the body of their argument,
spend time helping them develop their introductions and conclusions.
Writing
Introductions
Review
the types of strategies for creating introductions (also, see
page 314 - 316 in the PHG for additional help with writing lead-ins
and introductions):
- State
the Topic: Come right out and say it. Tell your readers what
your topic is, what the issue/conversation is you are focusing
on, and what your argument aims to do.
- Define
Your Argument: If your readers are familiar with disagreements
among authors contributing to your conversation, you can get
right to your main point—what you think should be done about
the issue or what you think they should know about it. In other
words, you can introduce your argument by leading with your
thesis statement. By using your thesis statement in your introduction,
you can let your readers know, for example, whether you are
explaining something, making an argument to convince them of
your points, offering a solution to a problem, etc…
- Define
a Problem: Depending on how you define a problem, you'll call
attention to different solutions. There's a tremendous difference,
for instance, between saying, "We have a problem with education:
our teachers are not prepared to teach the skills needed in
the 21st century" and "We have a problem with education: our
students can't learn the skills needed in the 21st century."
- Ask
a Question: Asking a question invites your readers to become
participants in the conversation you've joined by considering
solutions to a problem or rethinking approaches to an issue
or problem.
- Tell
a Story: Everyone loves a story, assuming it's told well and
has a relevant point. Featured writer Patrick Crossland began
his research project with a story about his brother Caleb, a
senior in high school and a star wrestler who was beginning
the process of applying to colleges and universities.
- Provide
an Historical Account: Historical accounts can help your readers
understand the origins of a particular situation, how the situation
has changed over time, and how it has affected people.
- Lead
with a Quotation: A quotation allows your readers to hear about
the issue under discussion from someone who knows it well or
has been affected by it. You can select a quotation that poses
a question, defines a problem, or tells a story. You can also
use quotations to provide a historical perspective.
- Review
the Situation: You can provide a brief review of the situation,
drawing on other sources or on your own synthesis of information
about the issue. A brief review can be combined with other strategies,
such as asking a question, defining a problem, or defining your
argument.
Writing
Conclusions
Introduce
strategies for concluding an essay:
- Sum
Up Your Argument: Offer a summary of the argument you've made
in your document.
- Offer
Additional Analysis: Extend your analysis of the issue by offering
additional insights.
- Speculate
about the Future: Reflect on what might happen next.
- Close
with a Quotation: Select a quotation that does one of the following:
1 . sums
up the points you've made in your document
2. points
to the future of the issue
3. suggests
a solution to a problem
4. illustrates
what you would like to see happen
- Close
with a Story: Tell a story about the issue you've discussed
in your document. The story might suggest a potential solution
to the problem, offer hope about a desired outcome, or illustrate
what might happen if a desired outcome doesn't come to pass.
- Link
to Your Introduction: This technique is sometimes called a "bookends"
approach, since it positions your introduction and conclusion
as related "ends" of your document. The basic idea is to turn
you conclusion into an extension of your introduction:
1.
if your introduction used a quotation, end with a related quotation
or
respond to the quotation.
2.
if your introduction used a story, extend that story or retell
it with a
different ending.
3.
if your introduction asked a question, answer the question, restate
the
question, or ask a new question.
4.
if your introduction defined a problem, provide a solution to
the problem,
restate the problem, or suggest that
readers need to move on to a new
problem. |