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Unit Two, Day 25 - Wednesday, October 18

What we'll do today in class:

Connection to course goals: The first activity emphasizes both response to a context and the importance of feedback in the revision process. It also emphasizes that they can make different choices to meet the context for Essay 3.


  1. Feedback on homework writing. Exchange your homework assignment with a neighbor. Read through your classmate's writing and respond to the following questions:
  2. (10 min)

  3. List an audience, purpose, and focus for your analysis. Have them use the feedback they received and their own preferences to choose a tentative purpose, audience, and focus. Remind them that they won't be held to these choices, but they need to choose so we can move on in developing a claim.
  4. (5 min)

    Transition: Because this assignment asks you to analyze hidden messages in TV shows, we're going to spend a bit of time making sure your claims are meeting this expectation.

  5. WTL: Look at your audience description (the audience you'll most likely address) and respond to the following questions…
  6. (5-10 minutes)

  7. After they've completed their WTL, have them use what they wrote to look back at their focus and in writing their claim to make sure that they're dealing with messages that wouldn't already be clear to the reader.
  8. (5 min)

    Transition: Before you use your choices and the information about what your audience already knows to write an actual claim, let's quickly consider what an overall claim/thesis should do for this essay.

  9. What should a claim do? Here we're working on focusing their essay into a clear and concise claim. Ask students to generate a list of what the thesis for this essay should do. What would a reader need to know in terms of what the essay is trying to accomplish?
  10. (5 min)


  11. Using your updated information on audience and purpose (and what aspect/message/anxiety you've decided to center on in the show), write a claim that could serve as the thesis for your essay. Be sure to keep in mind what we've discussed above.
  12. (5 min)

    Transition: Once you have a claim, you've got a focus for your essay. However, any claim typically implies sub-claims that must also be proven. To make sure that we're proving everything a claim implies, we'll now spend a bit of time practicing "un-packing" claims.

  13. Practice "unpacking" claims with sample theses.
  14. (5-10 min)


  15. After they've practiced unpacking claims, have them write their tentative claim at the top of two half-sheets of paper. Then exchange those two sheets with two classmates, and unpack each others claims.
  16. (10 min)

    - Once they've unpacked both claims, have them return them to their writers and have everyone look at the feedback they received in terms of what sub-claims they'll have to prove and what people will expect in terms of evidence to prove those claims.


Come to conference with your introduction (which should include some sense of your purpose and audience as well as your claim), and possible ideas for evidence



A draft of Essay 3 - it can be rather basic at this point. Try to work through the skeleton of the essay because we'll be talking about organization on Friday.


the sample essays (APPENDIX) - make sure to hand out these essays during today's class so they'll definitely have them for Monday