Writing@CSU

Teaching Guides

Teaching In The Margins:
Commenting On Student Writing

 

Sample With Individual Comment

 

Exemplary

Competent

Needs Work

Comments

Data analysis

Data are presented in ways (charts, tables, graphs) that best facilitate understanding and interpretation. Error analysis is included.

Data are presented in ways (charts, tables, graphs) that can be understood and interpreted, although not as clearly as they might be. Error analysis is included.

Data are presented in ways (charts, tables, graphs) that are very unclear. Error analysis is not included.

The chart on p. 2 helps readers see the relative percentages, but the table on p. 4 is confusing and difficult to read.

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