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Author Jaime O'Neill's article, "No Allusions in the Classroom," emphasizes the communication problem between teachers and students due to the students' lack of basic knowledge.
In the article "No Allusions in the Classroom," a teacher of fifteen years, Jaime M. O'Neill exposes the overall lack of basic knowledge of college students in areas of history, geography, and politics.
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