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Author Jaime O'Neill's article, "No Allusions in the Classroom," emphasizes the communication problem between teachers and students due to the students' lack of basic knowledge.

In "No Allusions in the Classroom," Professor Jaime O'Neill discusses the frustrations he had with his students not understanding his allusions.

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