Day 4 (Thursday, September 3)
Lesson Objectives
Students will:
Prep
Today you will need to review types of response and how the analytical/evaluative response fits into the first assignment. Before this class, be sure to familiarize yourself with workshop best practices and review the assignment sheet looking for areas you think will need to be addressed before students will be ready to draft the second part of assignment 1.
Materials
Overheads:
Lead-in
For today’s class, students have completed a summary for each of the three major readings (one was done in class) and they are ready to be introduced to response writing. While close reading is necessary for summaries, critical reading is necessary for response. A major component of CO150 is peer-editing, where students share their works in process, reading each other’s papers critically to give specific feedback geared towards the revision process. Since peer-review is such an important part of the course it’s worth taking the time to explain why we workshop.
Activities
Attendance (2 minutes)
Take attendance as you have in previous classes.
Write To Learn (10 Minutes)
Turn to Hawken’s “To Remake the World,” in your reader and using the annotations you made, answer the following questions:
Discuss Hawken’s “To Remake the World.” (10-15 Minutes)
Use today’s WTL to generate the discussion of the text. Remember you’re moving the students towards and analytical/evaluative response where they will be assessing whether an author was effective at attaining her/his purpose with her/his intended audience.
Go over assignment sheet 1 and explain criteria for academic summary and analytical response (10 minutes)
Certain educators have adopted a growth circle concept from developmental psychologist Lev Vygotsky’s zone of proximal development, which looks something like this:
When we introduce new concepts and challenges to our students, the idea is to get them out of their comfort zones (where no learning happens) and into the growth zone (where the learning happens.) When we do this, we must provide enough clarity and direction to keep them from entering the panic zone, another zone where no learning is happening. When introducing a new assignment, try using this metaphor to allow the students to consider the assignment sheet actively, deciding which concepts they feel comfortable with (ex: objective vs. subjective), which concepts they feel are still growing on them (ex: paraphrasing and quoting), and which concepts they are feeling panicky about (ex: analytical/evaluative response). As you go over the assignment, you might ask them to generate lists under three column headings:
Comfort Column: Which concepts they feel comfortable with
Growth Column: Which concepts they are growing more comfortable with, but need more time to master
Panic Column: Which concepts are completely foreign and panic inducing
Have students take out the assignment sheet, or distribute it at this time. Then walk them through it (no need to read it word-for-word, but be sure to highlight the essentials, perhaps by calling on specific students to read key sections) and allow time for questions. Ask students to read and listen to the assignment actively and critically, generating their three-columned lists. If a student asks a question you don’t want to answer right away, simply say, “let me get back to you about that” and then be sure to return to it on Friday. Be sure to include the grading rubric with the assignment sheet. Make connections between the criteria on the rubric and in the PHG. Ask that they read these documents carefully before next class and to bring questions they raise.
Why Workshop? Overhead (3-5 Minutes)
Allow this overhead to begin the discussion on the subject of workshopping. If you want you can extend this discussion by asking students for examples for each numbered point, but keep an eye on the time.
The verdict is in…12 Arguments for Writing Workshops
1. More input leads to better ideas and decision
2. Higher quality writing
3. Involvement of everyone in the writing process enhances the writing community
4. Increases the writer’s appropriation and ownership of the process
5. Higher likelihood of the implementation of new ideas in the writing
6. Widens the circle of communication
7. Shared information means increased learning
8. Increased understanding of other people’s perspectives
9. Increased opportunity to draw on individual student strengths
10. Ability to identify areas of potential growth
11. Provides a sense of security
12. Develops personal relationships
Summary workshop (20-25 minutes)
We’ve incorporated peer workshops into the syllabus in a number of different ways; we use workshop to help students engage in an academic community as well as to learn more about writing and its processes. The aim of a workshop is not to have a paper “pre-graded” by a peer (there are more problems with that idea than we have room to explain here) and so, more often than not, we ask students to describe the text they are workshopping and to explain their reactions as readers (not evaluators). Based on their prior workshop experiences, students may also believe their job is to "correct" their peer's paper, editing it for spelling, punctuation and grammar. We want students to avoid focusing on editing in most workshops. In addition, rarely do we ask students to evaluate their peers’ writing, though that is what many students will expect out of workshop. When we do ask for some evaluation, it is always linked to major criteria such as, in this case, accuracy and objectivity. Our aim, therefore, is to give students an idea of how their writing could be read. We encourage students to consider every reading and response as valid to some extent, and to make their revision choices as carefully as they read.
Still, many students expect that their peers will tell them that their paper is either “good” or “bad” and, depending on past experiences and personalities, some students will be eager for this kind of praise or will dread this kind of criticism. It’s useful, then, to work through a workshop with a sample summary (one of the group summaries from last week will work well) and discuss the kinds of comments that one could give.
Distribute copies of the workshop instructions (it’s worth it to make a handout—you may have provided this on the class page and had them print it out—so that students may refer to it as they revise and as they seek more feedback from others). Give students a moment to read over them, and then practice on the sample summary. Take a moment to describe useful comments vs. not-so-useful comments (useful comments are specific, thoughtful, point out both strengths and weaknesses, etc. while not-so-useful comments are vague, hasty, too “nice,” too “mean,” etc.). The student should now take out the summary they decided to revise as a workshop draft for today.
Summary Peer Workshop
In this workshop, one of your classmates will give you feedback on your summary’s accuracy and objectivity. (Accuracy and objectivity are the first two grading criteria for the summary, so the feedback you give and receive will be especially valuable!) as well as on attribution and quoting and paraphrasing.
First, trade summaries with another student. Take out your copy of the article your partner has summarized. Re-read the article. Read your partner’s summary and then:
1. Underline your partner’s restatement of the author’s thesis and then check it for accuracy. Does it fully capture the author’s main message? Is it worded fairly? On the back of your partner’s summary, explain your ideas. If you recommend revision, be specific.
2. Put a star next to each reason or key point and then check these for accuracy. Do they fairly represent the writer’s ideas? Are any key points/reasons missing? On the back of your partner’s summary, explain your ideas. If you have time, make note of anything extra (minor points, evidence, etc.).
3. Read back over your partner’s summary, looking closely for subjectivity. Has your partner included his/her opinions at all in the summary? (Look for moments of response: agreeing or disagreeing, supporting or refuting, etc.). Has your partner passed judgment on the writer or his/her ideas? (Look for adverbs and adjectives in phrases like "Pollan outrageously suggests that. . .” or “Pollan’s wise advice is. . .”). Suggest ways for the writer to revise any subjectivity out of the summary.
4. Circle moments of attribution. These include information about the article such as its title, when and where it was published, and author tags. Let the writer know if at any point you lost track of the fact that he/she is writing about another writer’s ideas or if the writer needs to vary the author tags.
5. Thinking back to the quoting and paraphrasing activity we just did, identify quotes and paraphrases by writing a “q” next to each quote and a “p” next to each paraphrase. Is there a good balance of quoting and paraphrasing? Are quotes copied word-for-word? Are quotations surrounded by quotation marks? Are any of the paraphrases too close to the original phrasing? Can you suggest any revisions?
When you receive your paper back, take time to consider your partner’s understanding of your summary: is the sentence he/she underlined what you intended to be read as your restatement of the author’s thesis? What about the key points? Assume that your partner read carefully. What, in the writing, might have allowed the misreading? How can you revise it?
Finally, read over what your partner wrote on the back of your summary, ask your partner any questions you have, and then write a revision plan for yourself so you remember what you want to do when you sit down to revise.
Review assignment sheet (3-5 minutes)
Ask students to take out the assignment sheet you distributed last time, to re-read it (especially the response) and to ask any questions they have. If your students don’t have any questions, verify that they understand what you are asking of them by posing questions like, “what would a sample thesis statement look like in your response?” and “what are the top two criteria for an academic summary?”
Discussion: How to write your response (10 -15 Minutes)
Generate a brainstorming discussion that clarifies the shape and content of the students’ responses.Choose one of the three articles (Quinn, Stone & Underwood, Hawken) to get the class to answer these questions:
Transitioning from Summary to Response
How will I know when you’ve switched from the summary section of your paper to the response section?
Thesis
What are some possible thesis statements that you could use to focus your response?
Reasons
What reasons could one use to support this thesis?
Evidence
What evidence could one provide to support the above reasoning?
Assess the inquiry (if time)
You’ve been talking about green messages for two weeks, and sometimes it’s important to check in with the students. Use a few minutes at the beginning of class to discuss where the class is now with its inquiry in what is the rhetoric of green. Call to mind the WTLs from the first day of class, and ask students to compare what they knew then with what they know now. What new questions have come up? Is the question "What is the rhetoric of green?” more complex than the students thought at first? What examples of green rhetoric have they been noticing? Have they noticed it more since they began the course inquiry?
Assign homework (2-3 minutes)
Assign the following as homework using the method you’ve established:
Homework for Tuesday
Conclude Class
Remind students of office hours and/or email and encourage them to come to you if they are struggling. While you may not have had a student visit your office yet, with the major assignment underway, that’s bound to change. Also, remind students of any policies (late work, attendance, etc.) that could impact their grade on assignment 1. Whether you've had a Writing Center consultant drop in to introduce the Writing Center service or not, remind students of its existence and hours. Encourage them to seek additional reader response from a Writing Center consultant as they revise their summary. Remind students that the Writing Center hours are posted at writing.colostate.edu.
Connection to Next Class
Next time you’ll briefly reintroduce the goals of peer-review workshops.
